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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 33
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 986



    Description:
       idk! idk! idk!
    I just don't know!


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    dotsleave me here.dots
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    don't tell me it's ok.
    don't tell me to move on.
    how dare you act like I'm fine!
    like my whole world isn't wrong.

    I lost him, don't you get it?
    he will never forgive me now.
    I just want to lie here forever
    so I can't let anyone eles down.

    leave me alone.
    I can't take this stupid sun.
    I can't get back on my feet.
    what I've did is alreadly done.

    I can't believe I had a choice
    you or him.
    I want to say I made the right one.
    but I still feel like giving in.

    maybe when I'm older.
    maybe when I don't cry.
    I don't know what I'm saying.
    I don't know if I should say goodbye.

    leave me alone.
    I have to much I lost to care.
    I'm sorry but I'm hurt.
    leave me alone here.







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