I push you away.
No, shove is more accurate.
I shove you away.
It would seem you enjoy this pain.
And though my eyes are shut,
I am not asleep.
I'm trying to forget all the words you speak.
Yet, I love you.
As I always will.
Forced by some twist of nature,
We are a set.
| ooooo....e cummings has nothing on you!!!||| Posted on 2009-11-23 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ] || totally awsome.|
i sound so cheer-leady..."like totally, like wow. like totally freak me out...." whatever. we need to just hang out sometime.
|| Posted on 2009-10-28 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ] || this may sound really typical but i like it. it is short and simple and mostly entertaining. i agree with kindredspirit- i don't get what it is about but it catches your attention and overall is a good read. the structure indicates muddled thoughts- not the concept but as if the speaker is confused- loved it :)||| Posted on 2009-10-23 00:00:00 | by darkestlight | [ Reply to This ] || Haha, I liked it. Once again brilliant. I liked how you braced entire sentences together and... I still didn't get what this was about it. But I liked it none the less.||| Posted on 2009-10-22 00:00:00 | by KindredSpirit | [ Reply to This ] |