do i sing yet? by PopRocksRae

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Submission Name: do i sing yet? dots

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Author:	PopRocksRae
ASL Info:	16 going on 17
Elite Ratio:	2.72 - 174/201/192
Words:	36

Class/Type:	Poetry/Being a Teen
Total Views:	26
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	229

Description:
stage fright or no stage fright

do i sing yet? dots

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solo light
center stage
everyone looking at me
is it my time to play?

do I stand up proud?
do I sing?
is it always this hot?
do you always get this feeling?

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Yes you can sing, and while your at it sing us a song of sorrow, in which only you could describe. I enjoyed this, great work.
| Posted on 2009-10-26 00:00:00 | by KindredSpirit | [ Reply to This ]

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