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    dots Submission Name: Why Do I Do This?dots
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    Author: halopop
    ASL Info:    25/f/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 167/141/21
    Words: 203
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
    Total Views: 321
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1239



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       jumbled pieces of mental matter.... jelly like brain cell fossils....

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    dotsWhy Do I Do This?dots
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    why do I do this...
    why do I do this to myself?
    this endless waiting, anticipating,
    one look, one smile from her...

    why do I do this...
    what am I trying to achieve?
    the end of my solitude?
    to be with someone...
    her?
    But she embraced my face...

    why do I do this...
    what am I putting myself through?
    do I want all those butterflies,
    those long winded goodbyes?
    but I’ve started to fall...

    why do I do this...
    what am I doing to her?
    monopolize her time,
    as she takes over my mind?
    I want to tell her...

    why do I do this...
    I stare at her face
    as she walks in
    and out of this space.
    I don’t want anyone else.
    why am I doing this?
    why give all my time,
    my heart and my mind?
    why do this to her or myself?
    there is no reason but reason itself.
    she is sublime, her happiness is on my mind,
    I must tell her now...
    or forever hold my peace
    but courage made me shy...
    dammit I’ve got to try,
    but I can’t because I’ll scare her...
    forget it……





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      i love how you set this pice up. i also liked how it was like looking into your mind. this was a good piece and i like it and with a little work maybe it could be a great poem and less random thoughts. keep them comeing lia
    | Posted on 2004-08-16 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
      Thanx for sharing this. I'm pretty sure many/most have had similar struggles. I still think back to 9 years ago. When I first met my friend Lisa, I showed an interest in dating her, but she told me she was only interested in being friends. To make a long story short, ~ a years goes bye. I was packing to go to college. She comes to say goodbye. We embrace each other and then I look in her eyes, and it seems as though she wants more than a hug. So I give her a peck on the lips(our first kiss) and look in her eyes again, and it seems that she still wants more. I was thinking should I give her a real kiss(my friend). Instead I gave her another peck and we said goodbye. I was afraid to mess up our friendship, but eventually wound up losing her anyway. Unfortunately, I haven't learned much in these 9 years, hindered by fears. Thanx for stirring up old memories
    | Posted on 2004-07-24 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]
      OOps...that should say SHAME on them!

    One more thing...Some people would probably complain about the repetition but I think it suits what you are trying to accomplish.
    | Posted on 2004-07-23 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      Why didn't anyone read this? Same on them. I can't say it's a piece of high quality artwork but I did like it. Seriously. It is like peaking into somebodies mind. We hear all the insecurity and self argument. Should you? Shouldn't you? And than after all this fighting with yourself you just throw your arms up in the air and say "forget it." I thought that was the best part. Not because you gave up...but because it seemed more honest and truthful. How often do we let our nerves get the better of us and we just back down for the moment. But, something tells me you will be back arguing with your old self again the next time this person walks in the room...
    | Posted on 2004-07-23 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]



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