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    dots Submission Name: Dance With Medots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 29
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    dotsDance With Medots
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    Dance with me my dearest,
    Let us float away on the bliss of consumption of each other,
    MY baby- My darling, Take my hand, let us run from the past,
    Looking forward only to something beautiful and special,
    In step with the music of our heartbeats,
    Let us move our souls in sync with the rhythm that we create,
    Dissolving with the tingling hope for something real,
    Let us forget mistakes we’ve made and bitternesses we may have from what would have been,
    This is far better.
    So baby- my darling dear,
    Dance with me.




    Submitted on 2009-10-23 02:33:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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