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    dots Submission Name: typicalculatordots
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    Author: ghad
    ASL Info:    25/m/fl
    Elite Ratio:    5.86 - 45/28/38
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 29
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 400



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    Arab so I
    Spit like camel
    And I’m gritty like enamel
    When I hit like gavel
    Linemen when I tackle
    High tower like Babel
    Like brook you babble
    Up creek no paddle
    Bareback no saddle
    Like death I rattle
    Stampede like cattle
    Smart like v chip
    Fresh like cool whip
    Shots from my hip
    Hit like marksmen




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