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    dots Submission Name: manifestodots
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    Author: trinityfinger
    ASL Info:    3
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 17/25/12
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
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    with no reservations, no straitjacket to hold me in
    because reason becomes insanity and no becomes a yes
    if only you let it consume you, beat you down into one helluva mess
    named unrequited desire and empty expanses of flesh

    there should be a world where satisfaction is queen, no less
    where flames and ocean and the dirt of our bodies can co-exist
    so that we may shout to the rooftops while perfoming parkour in paris
    or jump the canals and bridges lining a sinking and stinking venice

    sew every word together to form a speech of no set equation
    of sugary beats meant to destroy etiquette and illusion




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      You've joined a poetical world in which every artist invents their own religion, politics and psychology to suit various phases during the making of themselves. And the poetry is to oneself.

    I'll tell you about the future: for an artist, it is even more interesting than this world! If we can find the portal.

    Yes, you really are asking for prophecies ...
    | Posted on 2009-11-22 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      I live my life rigidly, like a corpse. My soul is straitjacketed into position by all my expectations of myself, by the way I wish to present myself to others. I suffocate and stifle every urge and desire, which is generally a good thing (I have a self-destructive streak) but nevertheless makes me feel like I am dying. Like every day I wake up reborn and kill myself off all over again. Does that make sense? I guess a lot of people live like that, to one degree or the other.

    This feels like a call to arms.

    It feels like desperate longing for freedom.

    Today I won't be a prisoner of my body, because I've read this and it makes me want to be free. Yes.

    You evoke so much...
    | Posted on 2009-11-14 00:00:00 | by AlyRose | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this.

    I'm going to be absorbing this over the next little while, yes, I need to find some space to muse and dream with this in my pocket, perhaps a whisky or three, some god-think-space, yes. I'll be back.

    Aly

    p.s purrrrrrrrrr
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by AlyRose | [ Reply to This ]
      sew every word together to form a speech of no set equation
    of sugary beats meant to destroy etiquette and illusion

    - i love this, but the agreed set of illusions makes this hard. you have a voice set to shatter such. a truth that is unique and valuable :)

    j, a man among men!

    | Posted on 2009-10-25 00:00:00 | by biska | [ Reply to This ]


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