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    dots Submission Name: Everydaydots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 437
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 378



    Description:
       More like a song than a poem. Just thoughts I briefly typed up about a special someone.


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    dotsEverydaydots
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    Iíve got you, youíve got me
    Just think about our love each and everyday
    Love is true, just me and you
    When we think about our love each and everyday

    Life canít get much better
    When we think about our love each and everyday
    Show me your love, Iíll show you my love
    And weíll think about our love each and everyday




    Submitted on 2009-10-23 09:44:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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