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Author:	misschalloner
ASL Info:	21.F.NV
Elite Ratio:	6.6 - 30/22/20
Words:	65

Class/Type:	Misc/Nature
Total Views:	16
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[10.22.09] dots

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Scrabbling to finish work. Work work work! Procrastinating is deadly, at times. The only joy in this day was him. Not he who haunts me! Not He who I long for. Him, the love in my life. This day, not holding the greatest happiness, was decent. It was just there. The thoughts of that love, my love, always holds me up, holds me together.

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Well, we all need a Higher Power.
Due to repeated disappointments, I had to become my own.
Hi, I'm Runes' God, and this is a great write.
| Posted on 2009-10-23 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]

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