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    dots Submission Name: My Moon in the darkest Nightdots
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    Author: Mythica
    ASL Info:    17/female/My town USA
    Elite Ratio:    0.99 - 4/3/4
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 30
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsMy Moon in the darkest Nightdots
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    My Moon In The Darkest Moon

    I thought maybe my world would be nothing but a blank sky of inky black that would swarm and become my life. Then one day I looked upon my vast darkness and found a beam of light. A vast shioning Moon in the inky sea of sky. Shocked and yet mystified, I followed that light into a world I never knew. I found love and hope and a joy beyond any dream I could have ever wished to think about. I traveled the Night's Sky and found that there are many stars and the world is not as dark as I thought. I thank my precious Moon for lighting up my life in a way nothing else could. For now I see the beauty in which I was deprived of before. I owe my life and love to you.




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