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    dots Submission Name: My Moon in the darkest Nightdots
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    Author: Mythica
    ASL Info:    17/female/KY USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.79 - 11/31/16
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Master Eragon this was inspired by you, always know that I will be here whenever you need me and that I will always love you.


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    My Moon In The Darkest Moon

    I thought maybe my world would be nothing but a blank sky of inky black that would swarm and become my life. Then one day I looked upon my vast darkness and found a beam of light. A vast shioning Moon in the inky sea of sky. Shocked and yet mystified, I followed that light into a world I never knew. I found love and hope and a joy beyond any dream I could have ever wished to think about. I traveled the Night's Sky and found that there are many stars and the world is not as dark as I thought. I thank my precious Moon for lighting up my life in a way nothing else could. For now I see the beauty in which I was deprived of before. I owe my life and love to you.




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      I kind of assume that you are aware of the fact that the cycle of the moon is almost identical to a woman's cycle of fertility . That being said , I can almost imagine what all the social communalism moonshine must do to women in general . Further more they get to imagine what all the trollwood it feminine mystique does to the likes of my on the rootclod . I remind you men are half female on the genetics even though girls are all girl there . This being said I would like to say that I believe I have been to this world you speak of and have indeed had a similarly analogous experience , beauty and joy and an endearing sense of reciprocated fealty .
    Moonshine ; I have many a lividly lurid allusion and intoxicating ambrosia that came from her , and as each new moon comes around I only find my love for woman deepening . I know , I'm a hopeless romantic , but of this poem inspired me to tell you so . It almost makes me feel like my own life could have been a small part of the inspiration for it . Its like thanks I needed that . Seriously its en heartening . Keep It up .
    | Posted on 2010-03-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
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    Thank you,
    Mythica
    | Posted on 2009-10-26 00:00:00 | by Mythica | [ Reply to This ]


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