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    dots Submission Name: Kirsten's Agreement of Physical Acceptancedots
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    Author: jayisademon
    ASL Info:    22/M/SoILL
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 129/81/88
    Words: 227
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsKirsten's Agreement of Physical Acceptancedots
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    Honey, I just have to say,
    you are the perfect
    spokesman for the lust and love,
    that combat themselves each day.

    Such a vulgar little girl,
    but those legs,
    they open and greet,
    like the most welcoming arms,
    but they give a more tender embrace.

    Curvy, and foul.
    You are a special child,
    with a mouth only a sailor could love,
    and a demeanor that I cannot help to but,

    Such an air of hostily,
    matched and accentuated,
    with an utter appreciation,
    of loose femininity.

    Hold your loose lips,
    don't let them fly just yet,
    Because believe me darling,
    I worship those hips,
    just as much as your lips,
    and the things you do with both of them,
    would make boys beg to let you make them men.

    What was there before,
    is still there now,
    except it's been dunked headfirst
    into water,
    but refuses to drown.

    What a web you weave,
    or better yet we wove together,
    I'm a footnote on your bedpost,
    and you're still my magdeline ghost.

    Together, We're unstoppable,
    and unforgettable,
    but all together regretable.

    As for everyone else-
    this is our own little world,
    that exists between our physical commencement,
    and you're detestable character arc,
    I would give anything..
    I want to be the stupid illustrations in your vacant little heart.





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    ||| Comments |||
      Where did you get the inspiration for this piece?? I have never read anything like this before. I like it.
    | Posted on 2009-12-07 00:00:00 | by Mythica | [ Reply to This ]
      you shouldnt think of yourself as another notch in her bedpost, no one should in either direction. but i can hear what youre saying how you gotta treat some girls(not women) like dirt.
    just to get in their graces. as long as you can differentiate between the types, you'll be ok but once you start blurring those lines. its hard to get back. --nit picking-- change "spokesman" to "pin up girl" in my opinion it sounds better.
    with ease mang

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    | Posted on 2009-10-24 00:00:00 | by ghad | [ Reply to This ]


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