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    dots Submission Name: passiondots

    Author: puppet
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 1/2/3
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Passion
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    i am lost, I look into your eyes and i see hope and pain,i see love and hate,i see a beginning and an end.
    i look at your lips and i long to kiss them gently and yet passionately,to feel your breath on me would be bliss.
    i look at your neck and i see a place to trace my lips up and down my hot breath on your neck causing you to shiver.
    i look at your belly and i think of my fingertips ever so gently touching you tracing around your belly button watching you hold your breath.
    my eyes are drawn down and i see all that makes you a woman and i imagine your back arching as my tongue brings you to the peak of ecstasy your hands wrapped in my hair pulling me tighter against you as the climax racks your body.
    i see all that i may never have yet all that may be mine soon. i leave that to her.

    Submitted on 2009-10-23 13:26:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      when i seen this , i thought it was purely deep & emotinal
    At first not knowing how to take this , this depth your hiding , but it only makes me want to swim deeper

    But its not a bout me these feelings so ill just leave it at that.
    I do think that once you open up
    you will find all the love
    you will ever need
    | Posted on 2013-12-18 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]

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