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    dots Submission Name: Spanish Popsicle Song.dots
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    Author: WalkMe
    ASL Info:    14/M/SomeWhere
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 26
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 745



    Description:
       I love Dora and those damn popsicles they have...>~> Hyperness causes things like this...


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    dotsSpanish Popsicle Song.dots
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    Oh Dora.
    You are so pretty.
    Not to metion your popsicles are so yummy.
    Mind if I suck on some more?


    Oh Spanish popsicles.
    You are so tummy.
    Cold within' my tummy.
    Mind if I take a trip upon one?
    My tongue stained red with the color.



    Oh Dora.
    Your popsicles are so addicting.
    Like Lady Gaga and her addiction to the fame.
    I want more!
    I need more!



    Oh Spanish popsicles.
    You are so tummy.
    Cold within' my tummy.
    Mind if I take a trip upon one?
    My tongue stained red with the color.



    Talk 'bout an addicion. Gosh.




    Submitted on 2009-10-23 17:38:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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