Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: autodidacticdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ghad
    ASL Info:    25/m/fl
    Elite Ratio:    5.86 - 45/28/38
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 36
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 963



    Description:
       check trajectory
    and launch from trebuchet
    im hungry
    lets get lunch from Anthony's


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsautodidacticdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Holy blind miracles my syllables
    Satirical not lyrical
    How a-typical
    When I demonstrate
    How I calculate
    The volume of the valium ate
    Is more then I would ever take
    Look my pupils palpitate
    Tap a beat to the sound it makes
    Cuz the sound is great
    Now let it saturate and marinate
    Like filet of steak
    Silent when I crack a safe
    Hold me back I’m a basket case
    Holding black masking tape
    With a mask on face
    Flow so spectacular
    Wreck tangled acute angular
    Pouring out the mandibles
    So grab the manacles
    And shackle anvils to my antlers
    Make that brain matter spatter
    Fanatic mad hatter
    Now tell this chocha get off the sofa
    And snort the coca, then do the polka
    Roll like a coaster
    Top model condition
    Haute doggy position
    Vertical incision with
    Surgical precision




    Submitted on 2009-10-24 00:29:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    179681



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry