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    dots Submission Name: "Paper Roses"dots
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    Author: Ron Cole
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 1932/1321/203
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 41
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dots"Paper Roses"dots
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    Her motherly heart just swooned
    at her youngest's freckled smile,
    and the gift that he had brought her
    surpassed others by a mile!

    He presented a paper Rose
    in his tiny outstretched hand
    that he'd bought from a little grey lady
    at a booth by the corner newsstand.

    It had only cost a dime
    but it was back there in the day
    when a dime would buy an Ice-Cream Cone
    or a toy with which to play.

    The dime was his allowance
    for the entire week!
    He thought the money well spent
    by the smile upon his cheek.

    No mother was ever so proud,
    or ever so deeply moved!
    No gift was ever more precious!
    No mother ever felt more loved!

    No bouquet was ever more thrilling!
    Even a diamond's brilliant glow
    could'nt compare to the beauty of
    that humble Paper Rose!

    Ron Cole
    October 2009




    Submitted on 2009-10-24 13:56:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey ron, it's kathleen! i dont know if you remember me but you used to comment on my stuff alot about 3 years ago :) this was a great poem, glad to see your still here
    | Posted on 2009-11-13 00:00:00 | by kathleenbrennan | [ Reply to This ]
      Another flawless and heart-warming piece Ron - I always get a wonderful visual and your rhyming and flow just makes it so easy to absorb!

    Thanks Ron and enjoy the day with a smile to share =-)
    | Posted on 2009-10-30 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah, excellent! Most excellent! Sooo wondefully nostalgic and finely done! You are in your element here Ron! This seems to have the makings of a fine song as well!
    | Posted on 2009-10-29 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Any gift from a child to a mother is precious...beyond all treasure!
    Thanks for sharing this poetic treasure with us at Elite, Ron!
    | Posted on 2009-10-25 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      This is by far one of the best I have read from you. Great work.
    | Posted on 2009-10-25 00:00:00 | by KindredSpirit | [ Reply to This ]
      Love is more precious than money. A small gift given with love is a gesture of affection. Love between parents and children is the only love which is unconditional and stable. This paper rose must have touched mother's heart and given the joys of her lifetime.
    | Posted on 2009-10-24 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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