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    dots Submission Name: Calling it gooddots
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    Author: MzAll3n
    Elite Ratio:    1.15 - 1/5/6
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 33
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 812



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    dotsCalling it gooddots
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    Stubbling underneath child hood
    crying to the people who always undesrstood

    Looking for an awnser
    Finding one , I never could.
    But I'm done asking others to tell me ....
    what they see... how I feel...
    I guess thinking .... Isn't my biggest skill.
    I'm calling it good...

    Some people understand me better ....
    than I ever would ... and could.
    Those who can't ...
    Need to find some other space...
    Because my heart ain't the place ..
    for everyne else to earse their pain ...
    and give it to me ...
    knowing I can't handle it ....
    i can't stand this ....
    So I'm calling it good
    Finally , I thought I never would.




    Submitted on 2009-10-24 16:11:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great work here! I couldn't do better myself. The content was amazing but the spelling and grammer could use some work. Also maybe try not to end every line with "..." Other than that I congratulate you in everything.
    | Posted on 2009-10-27 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]
      Extravagent!!! this is art, this is beautiful, On an emotional level it evokes empathy directly from those who read it, it sends your pain directly to us as your readers. this is almost perfect. you just have to watch your grammar. the term is "everyone"

    grammar is important but it doesn't take away from meaning and emotion. I applaud you
    | Posted on 2009-10-26 00:00:00 | by InsanityVanity | [ Reply to This ]



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