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    Author: SilentDreams42
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 38/30/42
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    dotstruthdots
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    I crave the truth
    For fabrication breaks me
    And swallows me whole

    I starve for the truth
    That lingers at the bottom
    Deep beneath the grave of falsehood

    The innocent
    The vengeful
    The hateful

    All are lies
    That bury us with them
    In an endless grave

    Indeed
    I yearn for the truth




    Submitted on 2009-10-24 20:45:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great write!

    I too yearn for the truth.
    | Posted on 2009-10-25 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      I agree with your sentiments here, but truth is VERY hard to come by. As quoted from the most important Book ever, "Man is a liar, and the father of it." Yes Sir, we can all catch ourselves every day at so-called 'white" lies.
    | Posted on 2009-10-24 00:00:00 | by edcherry | [ Reply to This ]


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