truth

Author: SilentDreams42 Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 38 /30 /42 Words: 63

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truth

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I crave the truth For fabrication breaks me And swallows me whole I starve for the truth That lingers at the bottom Deep beneath the grave of falsehood The innocent The vengeful The hateful All are lies That bury us with them In an endless grave Indeed I yearn for the truth

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Great write! I too yearn for the truth.

| Posted on 2009-10-25 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]

I agree with your sentiments here, but truth is VERY hard to come by. As quoted from the most important Book ever, "Man is a liar, and the father of it." Yes Sir, we can all catch ourselves every day at so-called 'white" lies.

| Posted on 2009-10-24 00:00:00 | by edcherry | [ Reply to This ]

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