i like it mang, just a few flow fixes in my opinion.
i know that sounds like nit picking and you didnt ask for that....
"All the mistakes that I've made"
to- all the mistakes that I made
"This feeling will always remain"
to -This feeling will remain
to me the vibe i get from this is that you are at a point where you want to move on but something is holding you back(a person/thing)
and now that you have come to your senses
you have no regrets and you want to take the good out of the experience.
and it sounds like some -staind- lyrics
(in a good way, i like staind)