Kerouac in Haiku by Runes

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Submission Name: Kerouac in Haiku dots

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Author:	Runes
Elite Ratio:	5.8 - 268/229/100
Words:	10

Class/Type:	Haiku/Misc
Total Views:	39
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	79

Description:
I just worked my way through a book called "On the Road"...
omg, the horror... the horror...

Kerouac in Haiku dots

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Jack Kerouac sucks--
radical for the 50's,
but outdated now.

Submitted on 2009-10-25 17:33:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Agreed with your sentiments here, -- and a good interesting Japanese form poem too. But Haiku is generally about nature, for me I see your poem as Senreyu, which is generally about a profound, non-nature subject having the same syllable counts per line as Haiku.
| Posted on 2009-10-25 00:00:00 | by edcherry | [ Reply to This ]

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