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    dots Submission Name: They Are Backdots
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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 294
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Venting
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       my best friend told everyone my secert because she thinks thats he's helping. They are all back in my life now. I cant change that but i wouldn't have to be like this if she wouldn't have told anyone, but whats done is done.


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    Just when I thought.
    That I could move on.
    His back in my life.
    They all are in my life.
    "Prick", "IT", and "PIG"
    Just because of one person.
    My life is fucked up.

    If I only knew that my best friend,
    Couldn't keep a fucking secert.
    I wouldn't have told her,
    But whats done is done.
    I can't change what happen.
    So why even try?

    They are in my life and thats it.
    Now I have to face the evil in-side.
    That was in-side for so long.
    I don't know how this is gonna work.
    If the evil takes over, who will I be?
    Will I be the same.
    Or.
    Will I be someone no one knows?
    Maybe I'll be the real me, who knows?


    So now I think of What to do.
    How to act and What to say.

    I ask why she would do that to me.
    She says to help me.
    Well fuck I was doing good.
    Without her so called help.

    Yeah I was cutting, well still i'm.
    Yeah I do drugs,
    but who doesn't now a days?
    She thinks that she helping,
    But she's not.

    Now that they are back.
    I feel like giving up,
    But not gonna because,
    I know that I'm stronger now.
    So I can face the evil in-side.
    And not care what happens.
    If the bad already happen.
    Then I know that only good will happen.
    But then I know.
    That I'm not that lucky for that to happen.

    Maybe if I keep my head up high.
    They'll think that I don't care.
    And they'll give up.


















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