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    dots Submission Name: hello my good old friendsdots
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    Author: ghad
    ASL Info:    25/m/fl
    Elite Ratio:    5.86 - 45/28/38
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 16
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 700



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    dotshello my good old friendsdots
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    Regular cast of characters
    called back for second audition
    faces I have seen times before
    fill the scene
    living room couch conversation
    tempts the kitchen crowd to overhear
    What the balcony forum is saying
    About the couple in the master bathroom
    And I could care less except for the fact that
    the drinks are cold
    the night is warm
    the herb is kind
    couldn’t ask for a better night
    thanks for the invite
    I had other plans
    but I was persuaded
    by better judgment
    to come enjoy
    the engagement
    subtly sedated
    and thoroughly elated
    thru mused inebriation




    Submitted on 2009-10-26 01:21:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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