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    dots Submission Name: scenes from the sublimedots
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    Author: ghad
    ASL Info:    25/m/fl
    Elite Ratio:    5.86 - 45/28/38
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 10
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 536



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    dotsscenes from the sublimedots
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    Cut my throat
    Cutthroat
    Sever the main vein
    And fly the colors of victory
    You win
    Code red code red
    Battle stations battle stations
    Impact imminent
    Denizens evacuate blast radius
    Sound the
    High alert
    Shock waves
    Bring tsunami
    How pretty, the ocean has
    Drawn back to the break water
    Fool them in yelling
    “smile please, we’re filming”
    Keep the cameras recording
    So there is an account
    Of what took place




    Submitted on 2009-10-26 01:25:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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