grass is greener on my side by ghad

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Submission Name: grass is greener on my side dots

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Author:	ghad
ASL Info:	25/m/fl
Elite Ratio:	5.86 - 45/28/38
Words:	30

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nostalgia
Total Views:	21
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	214

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grass is greener on my side dots

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Burn it down
Smoke a pound
Here’s my pipe
Pass the light
Now ignite
2 and pass
Learn to ash
Roll it right
Ash don’t fly
Otherwise
Pot snob cries

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