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    dots Submission Name: Swine Flu is a liedots
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    Author: Monsun
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Berlin Germany
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 16/17/13
    Words: 306
    Class/Type: Lyrics/The pain inside
    Total Views: 41
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 2260



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    dotsSwine Flu is a liedots
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    This is Death

    Can You Feel the pain Arise in you?
    Can You Feel the Hatred coming through?
    Can You Feel the End Coming soon?

    Feel the sweetness of Razorblade Kisses
    as they caress your wrist
    Hold in your hands the rope
    your only way to cope
    with all the disillousions of today

    Behold
    This is Genocide
    Genocide

    Genocide
    Genocide

    This is Genocide
    Genocide

    Genocide
    Genocide

    *growl*

    When the Razorblade is your only friend
    and Death to you seems a God send
    The Noose The Pills the endless thrills
    Just Take Whatever Kills.

    *Pig Squeal*
    Swine Flu
    *Pig Squeal*
    Swine Flu

    -cut the music-
    -Slow the guitar, change tone-
    -Sing no scream-

    you always seem to know
    just when to catch me
    When i start falling away
    Cuts Line you wrists, and mine too
    Your Heart beat fades and mine too

    -change guitar back to normal-
    -scream-

    Theres only one thing i want to do
    and thats to be with you
    dont leave me
    cause i will never leave you

    I only want you here with me
    your scarred arms around me
    my scarred arms around you
    you mean the world to me

    My own stupidity
    bringing my world down on me
    I give it all to you
    all to you
    ALL-TO-YOU!

    -cut the music-
    -Slow the guitar, change tone-
    -Sing no scream-

    I made my choices
    I've shunned all the voices
    I've destoryed my body
    to ressurect you

    -change guitar back to normal-
    -scream-

    This is Genocide
    Genocide

    Genocide
    Genocide

    This is Genocide
    Genocide

    Genocide
    Genocide

    *Pig Squeal*
    Swine Flu
    *Pig Squeal*
    Swine Flu
    *Pig Squeal*

    -extremly hard core outro-
    -cut music-

    *SCREAM OUT* -hold for as long as possible-




    Submitted on 2009-10-26 21:08:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ewwwwwww, David!!! Grosssssssssss . . .. . . But yeah, can't wait to hear this lieBe. .. ^_^
    | Posted on 2009-10-28 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]
      !!!!!! Make me a recording of this man!! It was an orgasm in my ears...
    | Posted on 2009-10-27 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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