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    dots Submission Name: Demonic Trails to Holy Grailsdots
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    Author: Monsun
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Berlin Germany
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 16/17/13
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Lyrics/What you did
    Total Views: 54
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 518



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       this is for my guitarist,


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    dotsDemonic Trails to Holy Grailsdots
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    I spent my Days
    inside your haze
    feed off my soul
    what is your -Final- Goal?

    You are the only one
    I can Count on
    to deliever me
    -Unto- HELL-

    I can always feel
    your love inside me
    destroying my -FAITH-

    I can Feel Hells Angels
    dragging my Corpse
    into the Fiery Grave
    You have made

    Apocalypse Kill
    Apocalypse Kill
    Apocalypse Kill
    Apocalypse Kill
    the swarm




    Submitted on 2009-10-26 21:12:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Finish the song this was good so far. Keep it up and maybe it will become famous. You never know...
    | Posted on 2009-10-27 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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