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    dots Submission Name: Constancedots
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    Author: Monsun
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Berlin Germany
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 17/18/15
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsConstancedots
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    I used to live in a bottomless pit
    society delt my last hit
    Gripping on to the four walls
    falling away from those four walls
    no one ever heard my calls

    God in heaven heard my prayers
    Damned of my prayers
    It was my last Hope
    and my last breath

    -chorus-
    Angel extended to me your hands
    I dont want to die
    without you by my side
    Constance just please.

    -music-

    -chorus-

    -outro-




    Submitted on 2009-10-26 21:18:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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