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    dots Submission Name: Order from Chaosdots

    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsOrder from Chaosdots

    Chaos now rules the world,
    The ravellings of history becoming unfurled,
    Time itself striping apart,
    Agony in every human heart,
    The mind fading black
    With no going back,
    Light fading away,
    Ahead looms a dark doorway.

    From the night comes a light,
    Increasing in intensity and might,
    It pushes back the darkness and reveals something new,
    A beautiful peace, born anew.
    Agony upheaved, darkness shunned,
    Order once again sanctioned.

    Submitted on 2009-10-26 22:10:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Plegias you are a very good writer. Though I'm sure you are already aware of that. It was very easy to visualize what you said, and it feels very original. A poem of this type belongs in a book, for many other thousands to enjoy. Good work.
    | Posted on 2009-10-27 00:00:00 | by halfjack | [ Reply to This ]

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