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    dots Submission Name: Everything and Nothingdots
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    Author: LilithMisao
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 0/2/13
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 419
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 770



    Description:
       geh, more writer's block/ hatred of materialism angst... sorry for the unending darkness.


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    dotsEverything and Nothingdots
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    Screams echo in the back of my head
    the volume loud and relentless

    My ears ring with their agony
    the pain of being trapped for all eternity

    My Feelings
    my Thoughts
    my Ideas
    my Everything
    withheld from the public
    Censored to protect
    the false innocence
    the pure ignorance

    Omitted to
    move the unyielding
    to halt the progress
    the Growth of a
    Human

    The void is filled by silence
    all objects are nonexistent
    not yet materialized
    my Friends
    my Belongings
    my Life
    my Nothing
    all are forgotten
    unnecessary to this dimension where
    Everything and Nothing are equal.




    Submitted on 2009-10-26 23:28:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very good writing in the sense of content but I really couldn't pick up a rythmn. I don't know if it was me or the poem but the content was good enough to get a 9 from me. Good job and keep writing.
    | Posted on 2009-10-27 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]

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