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    dots Submission Name: Not Todaydots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    15/Female/tmon
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 92/158/234
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 19
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 541



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    Who are you to
    To think you have
    Any influence
    Over what I do

    And who are you
    To care
    Who I am

    Just leave me alone
    Your words they only manage to hurt

    I’m no one
    But I know who I am
    Who the hell are you?

    Anger leads to nothing
    Only opens sores

    I’m better off without you
    If you’re going to act like this
    Stay away

    I don’t need you looking down on me
    Not today




    Submitted on 2009-10-27 07:20:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is the first poem I have actually saved to my favourites. I simply adore the message, it is blunt and to the point. I also like the way you have it written, it has a good pattern. You are a very talented writer, definatly keep it up.
    | Posted on 2009-10-27 00:00:00 | by halfjack | [ Reply to This ]


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