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    dots Submission Name: Dead End Streetdots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    15/Female/tmon
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 92/158/234
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 22
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsDead End Streetdots
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    Crash landing on a dead end street
    You get so nervous when you can’t feel your feet
    The whole world comes out from underneath your ass
    And you fall, tumbling into the grass

    And after you shake your head
    Blinking hard to hide the red
    The world comes back into focus, blurry
    And you sit back in watch, because you’re in no hurry

    No one can stop you now, and who would even try
    You’ve abandoned all sense of morality
    Could this end in fatality
    If I let the world pass me by?

    And I’ve made it to the end of the road
    Bold stripe, no outlet
    But I can’t find my home
    And I could never forget

    Cold hearted confusion
    Produced this illusion
    Do you know where you are?
    Has it taken you far?

    Broken down on this dead end street
    Drop your head, hanging in defeat
    Look down at your hands
    Is this what you had planned?

    You cannot take yourself back
    Tumbling into the black
    You are far to lost
    Do you understand what this has cost?

    Don’t go back to sleep
    You’re in this too deep
    When you need this just to live
    What do you have left to give?




    Submitted on 2009-10-27 07:20:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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