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    dots Submission Name: For Gwendllyn Rosedots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 23
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 672



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       I'm going to be an aunt. oh no! jk. but I'm so excited to almost be able to hold my neice and say aw! I wonder how the mother is doing?


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    dotsFor Gwendllyn Rosedots
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    I know it's not mine.
    but she is my baby neice.
    i have a feeling like
    she is all that they need.

    My neice Gwen.
    she is so small.
    she just sits waiting for the moment
    to surprise us all.

    maybe she'll be an artist.
    or a poet at least.
    maybe a doctor.
    but she will be my neice.

    I'm so excited.
    pretty soon she'll be out.
    I wonder if this is what being a family
    is all about.

    My sister must be going crazy.
    cus she wants to see.
    that cute little girl.
    the one that kicked me.





    Submitted on 2009-10-27 08:02:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Aw, Rae!! Sweet! Check the spelling of Gwendylln though. :) I<3 U
    | Posted on 2009-10-27 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked the silly ending. It made the everything worthwhile to read.
    | Posted on 2009-10-27 00:00:00 | by halfjack | [ Reply to This ]


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