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    dots Submission Name: let you godots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 35
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 891



    Description:
       to my muse.
    to my friend.
    to my heart.
    to my aussi.


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    dotslet you godots
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    I got you stuck in a jar
    you don't belong with me.
    you should be out and about.
    so I have to set you free.

    I watch as you fly away.
    not even looking back anymore.
    I wish I could fly with you.
    but wings were something I can't afford.

    I hope you get where you are going
    I know one day you will find love.
    just stop sometimes and remeber
    it's you I will be thinking of.

    maybe not so frequent.
    but little thoughts every now and then
    I will sleep in his arms.
    and remeber back when.

    life gave me a choice.
    I choose the one I want.
    if you had to be capture
    the I wouldn't give up.

    I got you in a jar.
    but I always should have known.
    sooner or later
    I would have to let you go.




    Submitted on 2009-10-27 08:23:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wonderful poem, truly. I wonder what you meant though, whether it be from an butterfly or insect to a man or ex. But anyway, great job.
    | Posted on 2009-10-27 00:00:00 | by KindredSpirit | [ Reply to This ]


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