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    dots Submission Name: had enough yetdots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 21
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1105



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       to one of my ex boyfriends and his icy blue eyes. bet he hates the fact that i hate him.


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    hey hey little razorblade.
    I got a secret for you.
    your icy eyes match your heart
    and they are as cold as they are blue.

    I heard from a friend
    you asked what I'm about.
    I wondered if I crossed your mind
    for me there is no doubt.

    You hurt me cus you could
    you cheated and you lied.
    you stomped on my broken heart
    and most of all you made me cry.

    you forgot why I loved you
    you changed for them.
    I thought if i ingored it
    you wouldn't give in.

    I'm over you now.
    I just miss you sometimes
    this guy that I'm with
    has your blue eyes

    but his are sweeter.
    his see me for me.
    yours were like ice.
    yours were too mean.

    I bet these girls you date
    all say the same now.
    you always have a way
    of letting us down.

    I told you, you would be sorry
    hope you never forget.
    I just have one question
    had enough yet?





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