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    dots Submission Name: My Final Linedots
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    Author: Erebus
    Elite Ratio:    1.85 - 1/5/6
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
    Total Views: 47
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 572



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       Well, something new...first time with rhyming...


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    dotsMy Final Linedots
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    I am not glad for this pretend,
    Your pathetic whines,
    I refuse to mend,
    I know the pain within your sleeve,
    You chose your own path,
    My way was to leave,
    I will no longer be at bay,
    Monster I am called,
    Alive I shall stay,
    Today I will choose my own fate,
    I'll give you a hint,
    Others are not bait,
    For the time this is what I am,
    To be pushed this way,
    I am not your lamb,
    You and I both know I deceive,
    But this web of lies,
    Myself did not weave,




    Submitted on 2009-10-27 21:06:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Periods Ere..PERIODS!
    :] otherwise...your poem is yummy...didn't know you could rhyme..

    I wonder who was the inspiration for this...if any.

    ~Saika X.T Ceria

    | Posted on 2009-10-28 00:00:00 | by Xiallia | [ Reply to This ]



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