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    dots Submission Name: Paindots
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    Author: Fallyn Angel
    ASL Info:    19/F/CT
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 44/66/84
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 25
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    Bytes: 434



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    dotsPaindots
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    Nothing can get rid of the pain.
    Not even the blood that has made a stain.
    Maybe I should get addicted to cocaine.
    But no I'm not allowed to complain.
    I live in a crappy domain.
    I should be detained.
    I bet you can't even explain.
    You're just being vain.
    I wish you would get hit by a train.
    I just want to die in the rain.
    You caused all of my pain.




    Submitted on 2009-10-27 21:11:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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