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    dots Submission Name: Wish I was theredots
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    Author: Midnight Shadow
    ASL Info:    19/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 47/143/118
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWish I was theredots
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    what do i do, stand by and make a fool, of me and you, im not skilled, im half willed, but baby, i woulda killed, to be by your side, in your time of strife, for the rest of your life, im sorry it was so tough, and that you had enough, i woulda died for you, baby you know its true, but you already took your pain, crying in the pouring rain, you just couldnt stay sane, and im sorry i wasnt there, for you id care, through the dark, wed find the light, just you and me side by side




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