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    dots Submission Name: That's Your Lovedots
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    Author: metallichick786
    ASL Info:    23/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 26/40/29
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 30
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1438



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    dotsThat's Your Lovedots
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    (Jazzy Slow feel to it)

    I am feeling lost with you
    Under the palest of blues
    that’s our love
    Beneath the skies of shining stars
    I cannot bare our hearts
    You’re so tough

    I am caught inside a whirl
    Neither a woman nor a girl
    So confused
    And somewhat skeptical of you
    And all the hidden truths
    That’s our love

    Chorus;
    And we walk through darkness hand in hand
    I am caught neath your wave and the sand
    Somewhat shocked and appalled I run away
    Cannot bare your lingering air no not today
    As the heaviest clouds
    Descend upon our mouths
    I am Caught
    Even though we are apart
    I do not blame your heart
    Just our love
    It is toxic with remorse
    Cannot Palette second course
    That’s our love
    And our passion at glance
    Is surely worth the chance
    Of our love

    Chorus:
    And we walk through darkness hand in hand
    I am caught neath your wave and the sand
    Somewhat shocked and appalled I run away
    Cannot bare your lingering air no not today
    As the heaviest clouds
    Descend upon our mouths
    I am Caught

    However I decide
    You won’t be my alibi
    In the end
    And forever I’ll ascend to repair the broken ends
    Of our love




    Submitted on 2009-10-27 23:54:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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