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    dots Submission Name: Knowledgedots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    15/Female/tmon
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 92/158/234
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsKnowledgedots
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    Don’t throw yourself back into his hole
    You just dug yourself out
    Look up at the world around you
    What do you do now?
    And the pain looks so inviting
    Cold simple and dark
    But accepting it
    Would mean taking a million steps back
    Into a place you don’t want to be
    Look ahead
    Isn’t this world brighter
    And more accepting?
    I could thrive here
    If I so choose
    But no matter where I go
    I always seem to lose
    What value is there
    To a world without answers?
    Knowledge is the key to life
    Without a heart of happiness,
    How can either be right?




    Submitted on 2009-10-28 07:13:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Other than a few grammar error's this was really good ^_^ I can realy understand that feeling but I find that you can grow past it. Don't let something that someone else did to you hold you back from living. Don't let fear stop you fropm breathing, and don't let hurt keep you from beliving in love.
    | Posted on 2009-10-29 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]


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