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    dots Submission Name: Confessionsdots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    15/Female/tmon
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 92/158/234
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 16
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    A clocks ticking draws time
    Like the beating of my heart
    Quick and impatient
    For news I am about to deliver
    Sweat drenches my palms
    Hungry with desire
    Accept it, get over it
    I couldn’t take it
    If you were to reject me again
    And you must come to understand
    I will make you understand
    That when I take him by the hand
    That I’m nervous
    I don’t deserve this
    Uncertain, every move is new
    And no one else may ever come along
    That will take me heart
    These arms so strong
    And I don’t know
    If I can go
    Through this
    Without letting you know
    I can’t let this show
    But if you disapprove
    I’ll have to tell you the truth
    And it’ll only hurt
    So believe me
    This is right
    Even if he’s not your type
    He’s mine
    And I have to do this,
    This time.




    Submitted on 2009-10-28 07:14:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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