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    dots Submission Name: [10.27.09]dots

    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    24.F.CA
    Elite Ratio:    6.28 - 45/42/24
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Misc/Dark
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    Last day! If you could scream, I would. Still, no voice; it is dead. Anxious much! I'll almost be sad when the project ends. -emphasis on the first word.
    Alright, let's go!

    Submitted on 2009-10-28 11:10:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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