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    dots Submission Name: Emotional Cutter, what is love?dots
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    Author: Scaredheart
    ASL Info:    15/ Female/ NC
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 92/62/50
    Words: 226
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       This was written while I was drinking milk, watching 'Sex and the City', and waring black nail polish. It started out as something emo, then went deeper and deeper till I finally wretched out my heart and soul and spilled the contents fourth on my paper in Orange ink. Love is something I'm not even sure my words have grasped, I find my self at a loss of description for the most powerful feeling known to man it's self. So, I attempted to bring fourth the lack of human ability to describe it in this.


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    dotsEmotional Cutter, what is love?dots
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    I don't need a blade,
    to cut myself vein deep.
    I don't require blood,
    to bleed to death.
    I'm a Emotional Cutter,
    I need only my mind to break the skin.

    Just because you can not perceive the wounds and scars,
    doesn't mean that they are not there.
    People can bleed more than just red blood,
    red, yellow, white, blue Ink is the same as what is flowing beneath your skin.

    Forgetting our pain, misery and lust that ruins us,
    every Emotion that leaves us asking 'What is love?'


    A word pointed like a knife,
    with meanings as sharp as Razor blades.
    Love,
    a word that cuts without pain.
    A simple word,
    with passion greater than hate.
    Love without logic,
    without the intrusion of fate or lust.
    Love a pure passion,
    greater than trust.
    Who can grasp the woes that will mean nothing,
    when threaded with the thread that is love.
    A ever forgiving tale ,
    with thousands of rises and falls of hope and Humanity.
    Every love telling the story that is portrayed by people of the past and the future,
    of every person to breath and live.
    For,
    every person shall and always has grasped, understood, endowed, owned, forgotten, discovered, and forged love with another.
    And shall it always be so,
    that love is ever lasting.




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      I...this is my favorite thing you've ever written that I've read. It's just...so deep, and true. It's not great rhyme or pattern or beat or...whatever...it's just...perfectly poetry. At least in my opinion. It's raw emotion, cultivated creatively into an art so rare and fine, I just...had to love it. Adore it. Sink into it. Sink, sink, and sink. Goodness, emotion cutting. The idea! The...


    Stunning.


    I love the way you separated the lines. They crescendo wonderfully. Just like ocean waves or ...storm clouds...or...*sighs* I just really love this piece.


    There is something about it that just tugs at my heartstrings, captures my soul, and tortures my entirety.
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
      I understand this. When one has been abused and unloved, one bleeds without being cut; the blood flows from open wounds in the soul, left untreated by those who should care.
    | Posted on 2009-11-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      wow this was very deEp dear. i feEl like i think of only myself when i should think of others to. I love you!! haha nice ninja hugs too grrs it hurt this morning though haha. but wow this was very deep i loved it. like i realy hope that obne day i can write as great as you. but until then i'm going to read evreything you put up and learn.
    | Posted on 2009-10-29 00:00:00 | by MiseryMarie | [ Reply to This ]
      Well first of all i come to say, Great multitasking! if you were really doing everything you say you were while writing this than damn, good for you.

    Hell this poem just sucked me in from the beginning. It is not the type that usually draws me, but it did, and it held on tight.

    I have to say my favorite part of it was:

    "Just because you can not perceive the wounds and scars,
    doesn't mean that they are not there.
    People can bleed more than just red blood,
    red, yellow, white, blue Ink is the same as what is flowing beneath your skin."

    It gave me the idea that i do not only bleed when being cut, but writing, and throwing myself to the page is another form of cutting, and i bleed words and ink instead of blood.

    I really like the idea of being an "emotional cutter" as in not drawing a knife, but words and feelings and emotions, to hurt yourself, its uncredible really, as i've been doing both on and off for a while, sadly.

    Also these lines really stood out to me:

    "Every love telling the story that is portrayed by people of the past and the future,
    of every person to breath and live.
    For,
    every person shall and always has grasped, understood, endowed, owned, forgotten, discovered, and forged love with another"

    For no particular reason other than the fact that i liked them.

    Incredible write,
    Sorry to practically write a book as a comment...
    Channie

    | Posted on 2009-10-28 00:00:00 | by dthforeverpain8 | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it! It was great how you said the things that in reality you need to do a certain thing like razors and cutting but then you said you didn't need them. Just proof that poetry takes one to a whole new world with no limitations except ones imagination. Great work and keep writing. I'm proud of you.
    | Posted on 2009-10-28 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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