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Bleeding Tears


Author: InYuco Katan
ASL Info:    22/M/Tx
Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 43 /39 /14
Words: 156
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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First time to write in along time...if you could not tell..me and my girlfriend broke up...that inspired this.


Bleeding Tears



Bleeding Tears
By: InYuco Katan

The day you left
the morning after
Tears from endless suffer
Tears of bleeding Truth

My suffering has only begun
Suffering that will never end
I had all i needed
Now all is ripped away from me

I have no reason to go on
Wondering how i will make it
Day by day without you
in my arms

Flashbacks to the day
the day it all started
the day it all ended
the days in between

remembering when we started
the fireworks above
the kiss of our lips below
the sound of our hearts

remembering the fight
the one to end it all
the one to kill me
when my heart stopped beating

dreams to nightmares
happy to sorry
good to bad
life to death

all of this
and so many more
in the time it took
the lead to hit my head




Submitted on 2009-10-28 15:56:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked this piece alot, and it is surely one we can all relate to.

The last to verses i didnt like as much, they felt as if you were having trouble finding a stoping point, and so you just kind of pushed one.

This was my favorite verse, despite its redundancy, it stood, out, and rang, very true.

"Flashbacks to the day
the day it all started
the day it all ended
the days in between"

Nice write
Channie
| Posted on 2009-10-29 00:00:00 | by dthforeverpain8 | [ Reply to This ]


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