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    dots Submission Name: Drugs And Metaphorsdots
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    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 10/192/232
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Drugs And Metaphors



    You get high off of rolos and skittles
    Pass me my Ritalin and lemonade
    And Iíll colour you in a different shade
    You mended my broken heart
    With heroin and a crack pipe
    And you didnít know where to start
    I just thought that you might


    Your drugs are like metaphors
    What more do you have in store?


    Iím getting high on cheese and crackers
    Youíve got you toast and marmite
    And that spliff you need to ignite
    You broke my broken heart
    And you didnít even need words
    Although they played their part
    I donít know what just occurred


    Your drugs are like metaphors
    What more do you have in store?
    Your drugs are like metaphors
    What more do you have in store?
    Your drugs are like metaphors
    What more do you have in store?

    Oh I donít have a clue
    Do you?




    Submitted on 2009-10-28 18:45:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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