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    dots Submission Name: The Leviathan and the Magna Cartadots
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    Author: colbybradshaw
    ASL Info:    24,deep south, u.s
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 5/3/8
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 66
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I dont even know. it was going to be a historical piece but then it turned into something of which i belive there is no description for aside from it itself.


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    dotsThe Leviathan and the Magna Cartadots
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    Once,
    when democracy loomed,
    like a worm,
    the leaders all squelched their beer,
    and swilled down the sexual potency
    of their neighboring kingdoms,
    by borrowing their women,
    and their protestantism,
    Eating the Lutheran Mud-pie,
    the maledicition,
    the meritorious celebration of 95 theses,
    and then the libertines rang the bell,
    and guillotines played,
    across the countryside and the cities,
    like an evil symphonia francais,
    a francophonic nightmare,
    an illusion that filled the hollows with
    the fog of an unfought war,
    as the bodies piled high,
    and the souls went to nothing,
    the pnemonic ganglia strangling them,
    as they lean against the pig wattle walls,
    and the man with the silken trousers passes them by,
    asking if they can spare a farthing for the churches coughing coffers,
    nothing escapes the lips of these,
    the poor,
    the demented,
    as the man sat in the tower,
    gazing at the stars,
    and dead cattle were loaded onto catapults,
    and flung at the enemy,
    to spread the disease,
    and yet democracy loomed on the horizon.




    Submitted on 2009-10-28 21:20:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is, yet again, very good. Where do you come up with this stuff? I totally get this poem. You should definately write more like this. :)
    | Posted on 2009-11-02 00:00:00 | by alyssafrench16 | [ Reply to This ]



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