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    dots Submission Name: The Fortelling of the Deaddots
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    Author: Sepheroth432
    ASL Info:    18/Male/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    6.04 - 52/39/23
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 22
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 1044



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       JUst another impulse writting i just wrote it while listening to some music. This cant really be placed and anything but it kinda sounds poetic is a strange way.


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    dotsThe Fortelling of the Deaddots
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    Where the blood falls as rain
    to many there only can be pain
    the hearts of children are fading to nothing
    and deaths become the primary form of release

    How these mental wars rage
    making impossible for life to begin
    mothers crying for there children are die
    as the mental disease of war spreads.

    Now as a mans strength fades
    the tear forms at the corner of the eye
    as he holds both his wife and sons bodies
    and to love he now says good bye

    Where the heart now fades
    there is now death and dismay
    demons now hold the peoples hearts
    and revenge flows like water

    The blood of humanity now fades into darkness
    for what we know as war is nothing
    and what is coming is the real test of survival

    Pray all you want they cant be heard
    for your god is dead now comes the new order
    hell has come to our earth as death rains from the sky

    ~Justin Laban~




    Submitted on 2009-10-28 22:10:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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