They are Bile, I am Rotten -------------------------------------------
FUCK YOU
And the vice grip you have on me
like I can never just
let
the
fuck
go.
I feel like a bad joke.
One that you laugh at
without the decency to cover your mouth
with your hand....
I'm just the same as all the rest of them
And that's the one thing
I promised myself
I wouldn't be....(the same)
I thought I was an Original Heartbreaker
an OH (lame, I know)
but you prove me wrong
That's what you loved to do.
What you always did.
And I hate them all
They remind me of the taste of vomit
at the back of my throat.
Remember when I said
that it fell on me,
you know what I'm talking about.
I lied.
....I did that because of you
in spite of you
or just to spite you.
I hope that makes you happy.
I'm worthless.
Something to be disgusted at.
No pity.
Why can't you just
fucken
let
me
go.
Why can't I just....
lose the rewind button
And leave you be.
Humm, I see anger written all over this. It's something you can find very easily, instead of cussing you might try to pull your anger out in imagery and such. Also, it's a common poem, I hate to say that it's unoriginal but it is. It lacks everything that could make it beautiful, there is nothing here but a empty vent of words.
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Om the bright side, you saw that coming and I applaud you for stating that it was a rant from the start ^_^ I'll have to read some more of you work so that I wont be stuck with a low opinion of it.
Submission Name: They are Bile, I am Rotten
