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    dots Submission Name: what a way you havedots
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    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    23/f/ MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotswhat a way you havedots
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    what a way you have with words
    capturing my heart with every sentence
    what a way you have with movement
    a perfect exit after a perfect entrance
    what a way you have with love
    enchanting my every being
    what a way you have with touch
    enhancing every feeling
    what a way you have
    making every breath worth while
    just like vanessa carlton
    for you i'd walk a thousand miles
    what a way you have with looks
    euphoric is every glance
    what a way you have with feeling
    putting my soul in a trance
    what a way you have
    with me




    Submitted on 2009-10-29 11:39:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Cute! Good Write!
    | Posted on 2009-10-30 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]


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