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    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    24.F.CA
    Elite Ratio:    6.28 - 45/42/24
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
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    The day has come again, yet again. Easier? Has it become any easier, to conquer this office, this building, this memory? Absolutely not. He is still here, tormenting me from the inside out. Leave! Slowly but surely he will, hopefully. I am prepared to beg. No, I am not! I owe nothing!!
    Essay! -work on the essay, it is due tomorrow. Work, work, work. Come on, just keep tap dancing. Dance faster!
    It turned out to be a rather long, but moderately pleasant night.




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      Just a question, I note you do make lots of comments on other's works, but your own input is more like a diary written just to fill in an empty space??? Oh, yes, --- the question, do you ever write poetry? I have a wish to read some of your work. Ted.
    | Posted on 2009-10-29 00:00:00 | by edcherry | [ Reply to This ]


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