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    dots Submission Name: Sicknessdots
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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/I hate you
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    Description:
       I just needed to write that even as much as i hate her i still need her and it is just sicking and i wish it would stop but it wont because I'm like addicted to her its fucked up. Really I so fucked up okay I'm not obsessed but something kinda like that.


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    I don't know why?
    But I love to hate her.
    I still go back to her,
    Even when she stabs me in the back.
    It's like I need her.
    It is a sickness.
    That I can't get over.
    I say that I hate her.
    That I never want to talk to her again,
    But by the end of the day I need her.
    It's really weird this sickness of mine.
    How do I get better if I don't want too.
    It's like I crave her.
    Just to be a bitch to me.
    It's so sicking that I need her so bad.
    I tell her everything.
    And she just acts as if it's not Important.
    Well fuck her.
    What sucks is that.
    I know I'm just gonna go back to her.
    And I just fucking hate it
    This sickness is killing me.
    I wish that it will go away.
    Never to return again.
    But when I really think about it.
    I know that this is a sickness.
    That never goes away.




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