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Author: WindWriter
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Wandering my thoughts
Is where the shadow lies
The echoes grow louder
As my eyes sink in
I overcome what I hear
To believe its not real
But still, Beckam she lies
Haunting my mind
Each day and night
I'm left to question
When, I ask, when will she be gone?

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